Closed mind
Prejudiced heart
Eyes of apathy
Rules of creed
Sounds of reluctance
Nothing could fence me…
Mortal passions
Morbid arguments
Endorsed ideas
Self pretensions
Accepted rituals
Nothing could harness me…
I am free.
As free as birds of wings,
As free as air that swings.
As free as the music that afloats,
As free as the waves on the blue,
And the rising embers across the shores.
The conflict between –
The agreeable and disagreeable
unties the conscious within.
The Phoenix rises from the frame,
I am your Conscience to reclaim.
Love, Life and Whatever 
Good choice of words…so true.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Amazing read. 🙂 I just loved it
Keep writing….Cheers
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Thank you so much
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My god why am i seeing only few poems?i never can write something like this.True poem.Outside things can bother you little if we follow our conscience.
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I wish to by heart these lines and feel this every moment. against all the prejudices and concepts of what is wrong and right, I wish to set myself free and follow my conscience. 🙂 Loved your poem. 🙂
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Thank you so much Namrata…I am glad
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“The Phoenix rises from the frame,
I am your Conscience to reclaim.”
A superb closure to the poem. Really amazing, I just loved it 🙂
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I am so pleased you loved it, forget liking…thank you
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Ah!words of freedom sound so good 🙂
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Thank you
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Conscience is chetna and in Bhagbadgeeta it is the ultimate stage of freedom from worldly gains( Moha). You have felt the conscience in the smae weay but made the meaning more clear. An excellent thoughtful poem.
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Thank you so much….felt those words inside and thus expressed…keep reading
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Beautiful piece of poetry…loved the concluding lines
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Thanks a lot
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Ah..this is wonderful.. 🙂
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Thank you madame
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lovely ! Iam ur conscience to reclaim just wonderful 🙂 good wishes !
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Thanks Ruchi….
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I love this line Chaitali – I am free like the birds wings, I have always loved that representation of a bird with wings wide open.. Says so much : )
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Thanks vinay
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Well scripted with words of freedom!
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Thank you Aziz…
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Well written. Good flow of words.
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Hey thanks for the words
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Nicely rhymed, Chaitali:)
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Thank you
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truly a masterpiece creation…
this poem is an exception which is rarely found.. beautiful creativity…
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Thank you Ashish for the appreciation….even this is my husband JB’s favourite…
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A dramatic conclusion to an extraordinary poem.
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Thanks Richard for the encouraging words
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