That night was special
When you spilled
All your dreams.
Those silent whispers
That filled my heart
With renewed gleam.
The night was special,
When you uncovered
All your hopes –
The hopes that you gathered
While life’s twists and turns.
The fire in the belly
Which lights your passion to burn.
And the night was special
When you cried on my lap.
The fears that you revealed,
The angst that you unveiled.
Your deepest apprehensions,
Nature’s cruelest intentions.
All lay naked,
Translucent and exposed.
There lay no secret;
Illusive or apparent
Between us.
There lay no layers;
Manifested or inherent
Tearing us.
There rests only
A kiss, tender
Born out of truth
With no lies or deception.
There abides only
One warm sweet embrace
For lifelong devotion.
Even after today
If I perish as mortal,
I will have no resent
No qualms, no fancies,
Only true content.
Cause your heart touched the whole
Seeking for redemption
Made love to my soul.
❤That resonates all the way through all the way here❤
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Hmmm….So glad
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That was so beautiful…
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Thank you Preeti
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Passionately beautiful. Looking to more such special and exquisitely beautiful poems:)
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Thanks for the appreciation Vishal
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Nice one Chaitali. I like the line where you say – there is no lie either apparent or illusive.. :).. A befitting one 🙂
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Thank you Vinay for stopping by and your words
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Love, passion and confession all personified beautifully by the two souls one who said it and the other you listened. Beautiful Chaitali.
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thanks Shweta for those encouraging words
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Beautiful indeed 🙂
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Thanks Anoop
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Your blog looks new and fresh 🙂 Really good.
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Reblogged this on more than hijab and commented:
Another beautiful post…..
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Thank you Noor for this honour.
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It resonates with my feelings… wonderful
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I am glad you could feel the words
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A touching and beautiful masterpiece Chaitali. Kind regards 🙂
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Thanks so much Dilip…
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Beautiful ! 🙂
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Thanks Mani
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Beautiful 🙂 “Only true content” what else could one ask for! Beautiful (couldn’t resist typing it again)
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I am pleased..
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Beautiful Chaitali !
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Its when soul makes love, Beautifully penned Chaitali
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Thank you Datta
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Beautiful Lines …
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Thanks Kokila
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I felt it… Very beautiful and heartfelt.
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I am so glad Arti
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so beautiful poem..
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Beautiful !
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Thank you Moonstone
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That’s so beautiful!!!!!!!!…….. Resonates with all true love beholder’s !!!!!!!!
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Thank you dear
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I was left mesmerized by this poem. So beautiful! :’)
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you are too kind with your words Yamini..thank you
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🙂
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Lovely Word flow!Liked the emotions portrayed.
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Thank you so much Rahul
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Ahh tender words, and even tender are feelings wrapped around ’em
Beautiful memories Chaitali aren’t they ?
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Of course a writer can understand
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Utterly beautiful ! 🙂
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Thanks Sharu for the encouraging words..
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Very beautiful, choosing right words. for your feelings is definitely an art & you are real good at it!!
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Thanks so much Sweety
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Now that is very very romantic …
beautifully written mam …
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Thanks Bikram
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Beautiful, thought provoking and emotionally fulfilling, I do enjoy coming here and enjoying your words.
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Thanks Ste as always
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Deeply touching lines. Love is not just physical but also spiritual.
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Yeah Priyanshi….when you can totally be true to your partner for what you are and the person still feels you….that’s what is true love for me
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Secret to true love is now naked and exposed 🙂
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Rightly said Vidhya
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Loved it :).
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Thanks Aseem
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Wonderfully expresses…
So many emotions; some said and several unsaid
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Thank you
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I feel like reading it again and again,,really beautiful
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I am so glad
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Hello!! I’m a new reader of your blog. I found you through a visit you paid to mine and also as we were both nominated for a Leibster by Abbie. I love his poem & have been looking for poetic blogs to follow and be inspired by. Thank you… Beautiful words. I love the idea of spilling out, I’ve had many spillages over the years.. Some beautiful in their release and some clumsy in their pouring. But all welcome and true.
Here’s to a new connection!!
Always, Amanda xx
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Here’s to more spillages….good wishes
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*this poem, not his 🙂
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I understand
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“Cause your heart touched the whole
Seeking for redemption
Made love to my soul.” – beautiful thoughts here 🙂
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Thank you Amrit
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Beautiful.! I wish I could write poetry too.,
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Thank you for the visit…you can always try I guess
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